Star Cycle
In the right place at the right time, the force
that causes things to fall to the ground
is overpowering. This is the birth of a star.
The reaction between elements
changes them. A star can burn so strong,
onlookers can see it and feel the heat.
The more the elements interact, the faster they burn.
But all we know is old news – we can only
see the star as it was, no matter how hard we try.
In dying, some stars explode, flashing as bright as
a billion of their kind, and leave a reminder. Others
fade to cloud, so you’d never know they were there.
I don’t know which kind we are.
This is the birth of a poem.
I have been saying goodbye to you for twenty years.
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This is beautiful.
Nature, relationships, making poems are beautifully in tandem here.
Nice metapoem!
Great poem. Great ending. You are so good Arwen.
<3
I love how you bring the cosmic down to the personal at the end. A deft handling of images!
Thank you all!
“All we know is old news”
True in physics
True in life
Your poem:!!!
Wow, this is just wow. The last stanza is magic.
I understand more about the demise of stars, having read your poem. Thanks, Arwen…
Gorgeous poem. Thank you!
This really struck a chord for me personally, so thank you. I find myself writing about the death of the old and birth of the new this month, as well.