Star Cycle
In the right place at the right time, the force
that causes things to fall to the ground
is overpowering. This is the birth of a star.
The reaction between elements
changes them. A star can burn so strong,
onlookers can see it and feel the heat.
The more the elements interact, the faster they burn.
But all we know is old news – we can only
see the star as it was, no matter how hard we try.
In dying, some stars explode, flashing as bright as
a billion of their kind, and leave a reminder. Others
fade to cloud, so you’d never know they were there.
I don’t know which kind we are.
This is the birth of a poem.
I have been saying goodbye to you for twenty years.
This is beautiful.
Nature, relationships, making poems are beautifully in tandem here.
Nice metapoem!
Great poem. Great ending. You are so good Arwen.
<3
I love how you bring the cosmic down to the personal at the end. A deft handling of images!
Thank you all!
“All we know is old news”
True in physics
True in life
Your poem:!!!
Wow, this is just wow. The last stanza is magic.
I understand more about the demise of stars, having read your poem. Thanks, Arwen…
Gorgeous poem. Thank you!
This really struck a chord for me personally, so thank you. I find myself writing about the death of the old and birth of the new this month, as well.