Status
In a ray of sun
particles of dust shimmer
whispering you’re next
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I’ve enjoyed lexpomo so much this year – thank you for being here!
(Accidental rhyme but I’ll allow it)
-Arwen “you are posting comments too quickly” Careaga
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love how you can hear and see yourself in a particle of dust
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me too. Great month of poems.
I’ve enjoyed reading your work Jim!
Wonderful, Arwen. It’s been fantastic to read your poems this month.
Same to you Kevin!!
Arwen, I’m going to miss reading the sense of discovery and truth in your poems. Do we need a poetry circle of some kind?
YESSS!
Yes I am sure we do!!
I love the ambiguity of this one!
The light, and sparkles, all positive, yea?
But it is literally dust saying “you’re next” which sounds a helluvalot like a death/entropy piece 😱
My favorite kind of writing lol!
Love it. I’ve enjoyed reading your poems this month Arwen. Hope to see you next year!
I’ve enjoyed reading yours as well Bill! I’ll be here!
Particles of dust in the sun seem to be alive as they dance around, so it is good you gave them a voice as well! Your work really elevated my thought process, so I thank you for that! Have a great rest of the year!
That’s so cool to hear Sylvia, I’ve enjoyed reading your work, thank you!
I’ve learned so much from your writing. Thank you for sharing!
I’ve enjoyed seeing you in here Sue, thank you!
Love this! Enjoyed your poems and thoughtful comments!
Thank you Linda! I enjoyed participating with you as well!