Sugar Plum
Sapphire saucers
fluid ~~~ shimmering
filled and holding back
vast fathoms of darkness
searching out signs
of a pass-through or a slip
into cautious momentum of both
trying to remember and
trying to forget
the angler fish offers hope
right before it eats.
That. Ending. Wow! Like, it’s taking me few minutes to recover. Very well done!
Your imagery was so lucid! WOW
Wow:
Sapphire saucers
fluid ~~~ shimmering
filled
Ooo! An Angler fish poem! It is such an original concept!
I love that, it’s almost shocking!
Sign of a good poem!