Suggestions
This year I cultivate the soil by hand
Use my own back and a hoe and a rake
Instead of my dad’s gas-powered rototiller
To let Creation know that I am serious
Every morning I water what the clouds won’t
And I evict the weeds who squat so quickly
I begin composting kitchen scraps again
Midsummer snacks for adolescent peppers
When a sage plant refuses to grow
And some rosemary only pretends to live
I kindly return them to the dirt
I guide toddling tomato vines up stakes
In the past I’ve tried controlling Nature
But now I only offer suggestions
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last line the kicker
nature IS suggestive
Ah, I’m feeling this. Getting lost in the dirt is therapy. Fine job.
I like this! Good poem.
Love this poem! Fantastic!!
a very good write; much enjoyed.
I relate!
I loved the image of guiding tomato vines, as you would toddlers. Your overall gentleness with nature is a great model for those of us still struggling to control it.
So many lines here I love! This is a strong and beautiful poem. The ending is fantastic.