Summer Job
One of the old-timers I cut grass for
summers to make money for gas and lps,
after I’d bagged all the clippings
and hauled the bags to the curb
would invite me to sit on a patio chair
and pour me a glass of cool water
out of a clay pitcher
and offer me a peppermint
in its cellophane wrapper.
I’d be miserable hot, shirt soaked with sweat,
wanting to get on to the next lawn
or get down into the woods
at the end of the cul-de-sac
where I could sneak a cigarette,
but he’d ask me plans for my life
or share tidbits of history he’d picked up
back when he was a teacher
at a university.
I’d work that peppermint around in my mouth,
the disk dissolving, coating
with its crisp burn, listening or answering
depending on the moment,
never going too deep into my own life,
for to do so felt like giving him something
that hadn’t been earned,
and also because the path before me,
overgrown and dense,
ran straight into the blinding sun.
When there was nothing to say,
we’d sit in the shade, old and young,
amid the smell of cut grass and wild onion,
admiring the cleanly edged walkway
the gentle grade, and watch hungry sparrows
come to the clipped lawn
to hunt desperate brown moths
that had the roof sheared off their home.
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You really create a sense of intimacy and nostalgia with this piece Bill. It’s an honor to read about snippets of your life in your poems, thanks for sharing!
Wow!
Each sentence
walks their own difficult
journey and we are there
whole and young and alive
at the end.
Master wordsmithery.
ahhhhh, Bill!! Love this tender moment in the harshness of a life that threatens to shear the roof off all our homes any minute. That last stanza is perfect. Thank you!!
Two great narrative poems in two days. Looking forward to more to come.
The layered nature of the title works so well. The job is not just cutting the grass, but sitting with the old man, as well as contemplating what life path to take. Each expends energy.
Really enjoyed this. I miss looking at the grass after I mowed–something so peaceful there, but I don’t miss the mowing part!
Evocative.
Love the detail, down to the peppermint in the speaker’s mouth. You have brought the reader vividly into the scene.
Great poem, Bill. An excellent narrative. It’s a generational story about young man in a hurry and an old man who has learned (from experience?) to take the time to take the time and enjoy what lives around him. I cared about both your characters. Well done.