Takes Me 2 My Knees
Such harmony & beauty at the shore + the way
she embraces with thunderous roar + her sneaky
beguiling grasp + the way she laughs +
never apologizes
as she pulls you mercilessly 2 your knees
demanding complete surrender . . .
only 2 do it again . . .
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Yes! Love the form + sensual imagery
Thank you Larry and thank you for reading my poem!
It feels like a large life memory defining happiness—I love the way the words rhyme and tell both relationships and story—-you have made such a lovely poem Darlene!
I’m smiling dear Ann, thank you for reading my poem and for your appreciative words! Grateful we write together.