The Abacus
Tell me the count of twigs and horsehairs
that robin wove to make her three-chick lair,
and the volume of her song at dawn.
When muscle birthed those hatchlings,
she cleaned them of their fecal sacs,
and soothed them in the early dew.
Did dew nourish both body and soul?
What attachment has she?
My daughter’s young child looks up,
a sudden awakening of instinct—
as primal as the one above.
Of our shared offspring, I tally the love.
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Let me count the ways I love this poem! “three-chick lair” is delightful, gives it width and depth. Yes, I believe dew can nourish us all. “Tally the love” fantastic ending.
“The Abacus” is a great tiltle for this poem and the uncountable wonders of nature and instinct. I love the directless of “fecal sacs” amid all the awe of the scene.
Beautiful nature and granddaughter poem. “I tally the love” is a perfect ending line.
Every parent should read this. I was not expecting the turn–but it was beautiful all the same. ‘The Abacus’ a perfect fit.