The Dull Woman Rides into the Sunset with a Haibun and a Cowboy
It was my first real job. Two years invested in secretarial school – long stretches of shorthand, typing our fingers into devotion, poised hours walking around with a book on our heads. Every month they took us to lunch – best dresses cleaned and pressed, hat pinned to styled hair, gloves starched white. We used the correct silverware, made small talk between polite nibbles, placed our gloves discreetly on the lap below the napkin. Nothing there prepared me for my boss – a balding man in a tatty brown suit. That first morning, he told me his wife was from Texas, liked that he wore his cowboy hat and boots to bed, made him say giddy up at just the right moment, leaned his clammy bulk over me, pulled open one of the desk units, and said he would have to get into my drawers now and then. I went home for lunch, called the office and said I wasn’t coming back, then took a job at a fast food restaurant. Nobody mentioned my drawers, and the only hat I had to wear was made of paper.
Spent with gardening
Boots shed feet propped to porch rail
She digs the sunset
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What a gross man! Horrible.
He was, but at least I got a poem out of it!
Wow! right down to it!
You bet! Thanks for reading and commenting, Alissa!
Eww, what’ a gross person.Glad you quit!
Thanks, Chelsie! Your poems and comments have been a bright spot this June!
Spent with gardening
Boots shed feet propped to porch rail
She digs the sunset
I love that you took control!
Thanks! Enjoyed reading your work this June!
Your narrative is spot
on. The two years at
secretarial school
sets up for the job..
Lots of economy of
expression (ie: “clammy bulk”.)
In this one you put the reader
right there with you.
Thanks, Jim! A pleasure, as always to read your words.
Nice one, Sylvia! I especially like “typing our fingers into devotion.” And the ending is spectacular – as is the title. I love the nudge to imagine that the ending gives me.
Thanks, Nancy! I will miss reading your views of life and nature!
Oh my—your description of everything was extraordinary and so vivid. Your demeanor and self control wrapped up in the rituals of the day—amazingly so —and the introduction of your boss as the character one could easily love to hate—-so well accomplished ! The haiku feels as though you are in charge digging “the sunset”. when day is done—it’s yours! Thank you!
Thank you, Ann, for reading and commenting! Hope we get to meet in person one day.
I love how you balance lyric and narrative in this form, turning the cowboy. “typing our fingers into devotion” is so great as is the hanging “Nothing there” to signify the line.
Thank you, Shaun! I appreciate your insights, and I have been really bowled over by your poems this month!
Your descriptive language allows us to participate in this haibun from start to finish. The Dull Woman is anything but dull as she uses her power to ride into the sunset.
Thank you, Lee! It has been amazing to keep in touch with you this month through poetry. Let’s keep it going!
I hate The Dull Woman ever had to be subjected to “boss – a balding man in a tatty brown suit”
Love:
typing our fingers into devotion
and loved how you landed this poem:
Spent with gardening
Boots shed feet propped to porch rail
She digs the sunset
Thank you, Pam! The dull woman hopes to meet the American Sentence expert one day!
Yes! 🙂
Dirty cowboy! Glad you left! The haibun was very effective to share this tale!
This haibun is so well done. Loved the phrase “typing our fingers into devotion.
The haiku at the end was perfect.
wonderful tale well-told and terrific haiku at the end. Excellent work!
You told this story so well. Thank you for sharing it!