The Esau Effect*
His fingers meander—intrusively—across the sleeve
Of his brother’s Armani double-breasted blazer ash gray
He paints a scowl on his face
Rolling his eyes he asks
How much did that set you back
His brother fails to respond
Label whore he hisses under his breath
He steps back takes a deep breath
Maybe this isn’t the time
To unleash his disdain
After all, he and his younger brother
Have not locked eyes
In more than two decades
He blames their father always placing his brother on a pedestal
Offering praise like it was a plated gourmet dish
Served with delicate herbs garnish
Moves closer to his brother leans down slightly
He grunts
You always felt entitled
Eyes closed, the younger brother still does not answer
The elder brother ponders why he agreed to come
Nothing’s changed
A slight tap on his shoulder he turns around
It’s time
Explains the mortician
He lowers the lid of the casket latches it shut
Locks the gasket
The thunderous sounds of
How Great Thou Art
Played on a pipe organ
Reverberates throughout the cathedral
Face flushed sweat beads leave a watery trail
He balls his fists
Storms out of the sanctuary
* This poem is inspired by the Old Testament relationship between brothers Esau and Jacob
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Like the white space (as always) – glad you took out snarkily – the turn is still a surprise!
That white space and clipped sentences work sooo well to create a mood in this one. Dang good. Narrative in the best ways.