The Gist of the Gist
All Marie Howe tries to do:
communicate the essence
of being alive.
And she does it sparingly,
with no unnecessary words–
just the gist of the gist.
I want to see how she
pares away the extraneous
when all we need
is the root dangling with mud
and the blossom glinting
with dew.
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Especially like the dangling root.
Oh yes! I love:
“oblivious to all admonitions
to pay attention,
hurry up”
I’m sorry, my cut and paste didn’t work well and I made a mistake. I don’t know how to correct. What I meant to say was I love:
root dangling with mud/and the blossom glistening/with dew
Wonderful. I like the unexpected turn at the end.
Yes, lovely turn with the last few lines!
Loved the plant imagery!
I admire short, spare poems and wish I could write more that way.
Thanks for noticing. That seems to be my preferred style