The Innkeepers Guest
For Tim and Tammy
Timothy’s father passed away.
Left him an old farmhouse
and some acres to tend.
A woman in his memory
helped with the tobacco.
Beautiful, with two babies.
Back then he ran
away from stepping
into just-add-daddy shoes.
Tim found her a few years ago.
Ten grandchildren,
a long life told over the phone.
True and gentle, an old, older love.
Trips to the cabin by the lake.
Campfires, marshmallows, time.
Tim is broken now.
Beat down
like his father’s house.
They were repairing that
old farm, he was grandpa
living it.
He got to say ” I am
her husband”
at the hospital,
hold her hand
for her last day
of breathing.
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‘True and gentle, an old, older love.” What a touching line. The simple language and form of this also honors their love story.
Another part I love is this:
Back then he ran
away from stepping
into just-add-daddy shoes.
Dang this is good! I love the searing clarity of this poem, the tenderness, and the formal beauty of the lines and stanzas. You are growing in poetry with every one you post.
So sad and so much said in few words…he ran away from just stepping into just -add-daddy shoes was brilliant!
I like this very much, the narrative, the tenderness.
Wonderful words to honor lives. “a long life told over the phone” – nice line!
There’s lots I like about this poem, but especially stanza 4 & the line “a long life told over the phone”.
Ouch, I really felt this poem as I too have ran from “just-add-daddy shoes…brilliant!