The Letter
June 29th, 2022
The steep forest trails
through holy dappled thickets
are drenched with poems
Ascending the Trail
123 Present Moment
Big Hill, Kentucky
Dear Ascending ,
On hard packed Kentucky clay and stone.
What started as a fire break cut by a dozer
is a trail that goes straight up toward the tall
rock face that towers over the sanctuary.
The forest is closing in on the branches
of the runoff ditches that cut it in two places
and branches of young pines reach across
above the path to play with each other’s needles.
Following the guest up toward the benches
which are settled there for watching the words
and the world float by below I see his thumb
lightly touch each finger on his right hand.
I laughed out loud without realizing it and
as he turned to ask why he saw the lake
was a carpet of diamonds. While he let go
of his held breath he asked what was so funny.
My reply still laughing ,
“counting syllables.”
Sky touches the ground.
We hope someday you’ll join us.
Standing in the sky
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I’ll take that invitation! The sneaky haiku too, err, three.
gorgeous!
pivot and parry.-
water cuts the edge of play
needle to needle
“gorgeous” was at the tip of my tongue, too, especially “a carpet of diamonds” and the trees touching. I love the healing touch of pine trees reaching out to each other, but most of all the joyous tone
This: a sanctuary (holy place) of poetry (“counting syllables”) with an invitation. I accept.
Love those fingers counting syllables. It’s also a treat for me to read these poems having visited the very ground they describe so beautifully.
I m thrown back in my chair after reading this, and smiling. This poem celebrates so many things–and is so clever luring us on and fun in that way –all the while I am thinking what a paradise you must live in—and then I laugh again at “counting syllables” as I have been caught doing the same this past month….and then just feel awe with the final haiku….”standing in the sky”. ….Thank you!
Syllables–you count them–I figure out where they correctly break.
a generous guide! yes, i want to come too.
Love:
the look of this poem on the page,
the clear images
the clever position of one of three haiku:
Ascending the Trail
123 Present Moment
Big Hill, Kentucky
and the humor so well placed:
“counting syllables.”
I love the format you’ve done here!
and branches of young pines reach across
above the path to play with each other’s needles.
&. “counting syllables.”
Wonderfully inviting!