The Year of Running Away
One summer I sold flowers on a street corner.
It was Arizona and the sun converted
the crust from my northern bones
into orange smoothies and halter tops.
I skateboarded in the park
and forgot the language of snow.
With each bouquet I hawked,
my hair grew blonder and wilder,
the sun a drama queen
turning my skin into a fading
remembrance of winters past
until I owned that street corner.
Bright carnations and daisies,
a whisper of baby’s breath and fern,
the bundles flew into car windows—
a quick gift for grandma,
husbands hoping to bury mistakes,
hospital errand duties—
impulse buying in a fast food world.
I lived in a shady apartment
above a thriving jazz club
with Jeannie who read palms
and took her bible to bed,
two windblown transplants
eager for adventure.
We discovered Nina and Billie
and the syncopation of women.
We hung out with life that summer,
tasted dangers our mothers warned us about,
paving a new path to adulthood
and flourishing in that culture
where even the cactus bloomed,
beautiful and temporary
like dust dancing through sunshine.
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Goodness, Sylvia, what a fleshed-out memory! Love “turning my skin into a fading/ remembrance.” Love he elegiac last line. One of my all-time favorite poems of yours.
This is so wonderful. “We hung out with life that summer” and “like dust dancing through sunshine” are evocative of that time of life that shapes us for good.
‘We hung out with life that summer,
tasted dangers our mothers warned us about’
What a fun time you had! I can see it all in the Arizona sun!
How wonderful to have lived that adventure, and how wonderful for us to get to relive it with you!! I love so many of the lines, but I think my favorite is “the syncopation of women”!! Yes!! Just a great poem!!
tasted dangers our mothers warned us about
how great!
Loved the images and story of this poem! Sun converted the crust from my northern bones!
Lovely. Just lovely. Thank you.
Ditto what everyone else said. Description put me right into the scene, the mood, the time.
Beautifully done,
I love this beautiful tribute to youth and carefree adventure in the sun. Such a lovely poem.
Lovely!
I loved this and wished it was my life. wonderful. Thanks for sharing.
The echoes in this poem are fascinating, especially your roomie “who read palms and took her bible to bed” – intriguing! And the acknowledgement that you “hung out with life that summer” – and then life happens. And you still have a memory-eye to bring it to life again, with generosity, in your poem.
This is so vivid, Sylvia. Thanks for sharing what it was like to “hang out with life.”
Thank you all for your comments! Much appreciated!