time shock – ryuka
The shock. Awake at 3:00 AM,
mind roams night like you once roamed
empty streets moon drifting… eerie
surreal shadows of age
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The shock. Awake at 3:00 AM,
mind roams night like you once roamed
empty streets moon drifting… eerie
surreal shadows of age
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“once roamed/ empty streets moon drifting…” gets beautifully at the carefree (sleep schedule) of youth
Carole, thank you for the introduction to this form.
I love what you are doing with it.
This is one of my favorite things about June. Sharing new discoveries in form.
It has been a delight reading your work this month ❤️
Thank you so much!