To Kill a Housefly
It’s a sin to kill a mockingbird.
— Atticus Finch
First of all, Atticus,
a housefly is no mockingbird.
I’ll grant they both have wings
& a song, if you can call that
droning buzz a song (an original
at least, unlike the mockingbird’s
karaoke of its neighbors’ greatest
hits), but even you couldn’t
concentrate with that racket
in your ear—or fail to think
of what it likes to eat & where
it lays its eggs—& before I know it
the swatter’s in my hand
& then comes the silence,
blissful at first but then somehow
not. There’s the corpse to deal with,
for one thing, or maybe it’s the way
a corpse is a corpse no matter
whose, or how even with those
compound eyes like disco balls
it rarely sees the swatter coming,
defenseless as a child skipping rope
beneath a falling piano, or how
near sunset it’s drawn to the light
streaming through the west-facing
window, where it’s a sitting duck
or would be if I weren’t drawn there
too, distracted by the very same sight,
& we both fall still & gaze
in wonder at the end of the day.
22 thoughts on "To Kill a Housefly"
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These couplets working so very hard! Simply adore the way you circle around from the epistle to the humorous to the reflection at the end, drawing together all the threads into a meditation on life! 💙💙💙
Love the title and how you use the mockingbird reference. And that ending couplet!
Love the concluding lines, Kevin. So nice to read your poems again!
This really raises an important question about our relationship with the natural world and the consequences of our actions, wonderful write!
I love this, the vivid images and the play between the humorous and the serious.
This poem will help me deal with my complicated thoughts over dealing with our carpenter bees. It taps so well into how we do share the planet with every thing in our environment Really loved this poem…..with the many lines that keeping you moving through it like in flight.
I love this poem’s pacing and tone. Really love “compound eyes like disco balls.” Reading your work is always a delight.
Excellent! I can only echo the comments posted above. And then I’ll add that you must be much more skilled with the swatter than I am!
Yeah I’m deadly with that swatter. Thanks, Mary.
I love the conversation with Atticus and agree with all the above comments! Delightful poem!
Beautiful
& deft.
This is a gem! So much detail to draw in the reader and then the lyrical ending.
I felt the same ambivalence the other day regarding a gnat of some sort–without your poem’s exquisite resolution
Speechless. All I can report is a sense of nausea at the urgency created in the movement of the lines, the drive of enjambment after enjambment – pity for the damned fly, and compassion for the narrator.
Love this, its tone and humor. But also of course deadly serious. Much to admire here. Suggest you submit it. Looks like a winner to me!
Thanks for the comments, everyone! Y’all are the best.
Really enjoyed this. You mined so much humor and beauty from this tiny, everyday moment.
I really appreciate how such a mundane, every day experience (we’ve all held the swatter) leads into the unexpected, unspoken truce at the end. There are people who would have still made the kill.
Kevin – You know how much I love your haikus, but your longer poems offer us your other talents with wit and word! Couplets a good form for you and Atticus.
I love how you and the housefly are simpatico in the end! We’re all beneath the unknown flyswatter…
you are flycult now..
the fly belongs to noone.
nice work.
Enjoy the humor!