Touché
I thought a suns spring shine was here to stay, then you bring nine mammatus clouds that are gray
Touché
I sought five drums with beats that wildly play, to dance brutalise on feet I adjust for ballet
Touché
I allot sums of time to pick and arrange a bouquet, then she doesn’t show up for the rest of the day
Touché
but I also fraught over emotions that led me astray, now I think not about notions you send me my way
TOUCHÉ
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Absolutely wonderful. Great craftsmanship, love the music of it, this is an awesome piece.
Thank you Philip! I look forward to reading your work as well!
“Now I think not about notions” is a wonderful joining that rolls off the tongue. Nice work.
Thank you Bernard, I appreciate the feedback!
Oh, “I allot sums of time to pick and arrange a bouquet, then she doesn’t show up for the rest of the day.” So poignant.
Touché
Thank you! I’m glad you felt it
Beautifully crafted
I appreciate you reading, thanks!
So sweet-sounding! Loved it.
Thank you, I really appreciate that. Looking forward to more of your writes this month.
This poem had a really light tone and was enjoyable to read!