trying to say god
many like to look
at mountain rivers
their moments of
wild holiness
few care to watch
far more subtle winds
even as they become
like flowing water
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Flowing water is a powerful image…
I had to read this one twice. It made me think. I like that.
You’re off to a great start, Kate. I love how your poem itself is an examples of “subtle winds.”
Nice!