Turning Somersaults
Uncle Maurice buys an acre
with a green pond next to a llama
farm especially for Muriel,
his 11-year-old niece. He chops
a pile of cedar & builds an octagon
gazebo & spreads out a fuzzy
wool blanket where Muriel pores
over storybooks. He practices
harmonica & smokes Cuban
cigarillos, which are forbidden
at home. Today Muriel grabs
her dress-up doll, stuffs
a tote bag full with doll
clothes, a copy of Songs
of Humpback Whales, a sketch
pad of multicolored
papers & a box of 12 super-sized
crayons. A llama
brays, prompting a gentle
swaying of pond
like the ruffles of a prom
dress. In the shade of a Big
Leaf Maple they a nosh
on Braeburn apples & dark
chocolate. Muriel naps
& dreams she is a trapeze
artist with elegant muscled
legs turning three
somersaults in the cool
afternoon air. As the sun
heads down the peach
tinged skyscape Maurice rolls
her wheelchair close to the blanket
& bends over to lift her
up with both arms.
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the turn of the wheelchair had me especially. the delight in her life is infectious, kids are unbridled. the image of the pond responding like a ruffling prom dress to the bray of a llama was a surreal turn. the energy of your breaks had such drive and cleanness. how the hell.
such a scene, felt like i was there. love uncle maurice for his harmonica and cigarillos, and for this gift he’s given muriel.
The turn in this one floored me.
Incredible poem.
Here’s to the uncles, they are
Somethin.
Beautiful as always, Linda. The ending makes me feel, as they say, some kind of way.
if it makes any sense to say…
here it feels like you’ve perfectly
married the circle to the square..
(echo applause for these linebreaks too)
The internal rhyme of “cedar” and “gazebo” is one small part of the poem’s music that builds to the ending
I have to come back and echo Dustin’s echoing applause.
Your linebreaks are phenomenal!
What a scene you create. Love the skinny lines and how it moves down the page, and the turn it takes near the end. So imaginative.
This one steals the show
Love this uncle! The ending is full of glorious joy!
Nice verb:
nosh
This is a beautiful portrait of a moment and the people in it.
Beautiful story, powerful ending