Under the down comforter
I celebrate the warmth of solitude.
Tiny feathers cling to each other,
repel winter’s cold and the white
noise of the day, the buzzing
that seems never to end. They chase
the chatter so far, I lose its cloying
scent, the clicks and clanks
of its claws and chains. With one
cleansing breath, I have entered
my temple, more a convent cell
than a consecrated space.
It is dark—the only light needed
the tricks closed eyes play, magical
as candlelight. And the silence—
sacred how it wraps around me
in its own version of flannel,
sacred in how it plays at being
as infinite as numbers. Then comes
the balance this space claims,
the moment when I lose track
of warmth, darkness, silence
and fall asleep.
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Great description and details of warmth, peace, silence.
Nancy, you really bring to life these moments of “warmth, darkness, silence.” It’s so vital to revel in them.
it’s nearly summer, and I’m still sleeping under my down comforter, but tonight I’ll savor it better for reading your poem
I absolutely dread giving up the comforter at the change of season!
I appreciate especially the holiness conveyed here in the ordinary…
Great title!
Love: And the silence— /sacred how it wraps around me/in its own version of flannel,/sacred in how it plays at being
as infinite as numbers.
Yummy poem. I love a down comforter in winter.
Love the ideas of temple & convent cell. this poem makes me feel nice.
Very snuggly!! Just in time for my afternoon nap.
These lines made me so happy — “I lose its cloying
scent, the clicks and clanks
of its claws and chains.”
Super comfy! Great write!
Esp. like the all the c’s in the center section, and “the tricks closed eyes play” (I remember, as a child, watching those lights and colors), “its own version of flannel,” and “infinite as numbers.” Such an evocative poem.