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cradle yesterday
staple what i say
to your bedside place
and keep going
check your old id
see what i see
grow eternally
and stop running
let me hold you down
i can keep you now
help me sew your frown
we’ll be loving
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I like the fifth line because it can be two ways: check your old id (identification) or check your old id (Freud’s word for the part of the personality that drives behavior).
the sounds and rhythm are so good, i had to read it out loud. really love cradle and staple together
Your voice is so strong here!
we /will/ be loving
I love the flow.