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Although a storm was stirring.
A sailed towards a dream, a land of possobility.
But the storm hit hard and the waves were raging,
water splashing into my small canoe,
my ship, that I was trying to sail.
I could see my dream,
A speck of land in the distance,
but could I reach it, no to close but yet too far.
To much water in my boat starting to sink and I sank.
Far below the water. But I swam.
Towards that little speck of light in the distance,
to close but yet to far. But I got there, back to the top.
I could see the land in the distance,
to close but yet to far.
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Abra – Great dream images! I love “my small canoe/my ship” with the emphasis on “my.” The repetition works well. Always swim toward that “little speck of light”! Nicely done!
Great work Abra! Nicely done!
Strong images. I like the way you repeat “too close but yet too far”.
With every line, kept wanting to know what happened. You sure know how to tell a story. Memorable poem
Wonderful imagery, and I loved the repeating refrain.