Impatience, Boxed-Up
For months I have been towing today
into tomorrow. Stuck in limbo, this is take,
is see, is pulling me loose.
I am exhausted with red tape, with tucking
and folding another email into the void.
Left hanging, imagine the last autumn leaf
on the old oak tree–this is my patience now.
But outside, summer makes its move. I think,
I have been separated from _________ for so long,
it is pouring me out.
One day, like a chrysalis,
I’ll shed this cocoon. Until then
I’ll beat my new wings against the walls.
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Loved first line…towing today into tomorrow and the chrysalis metaphor!
Shaun – This poem has such movement and emotion.. Love “towing today/into tomorrow.” And the added “this is my patience now.” Hope you find what you are looking for.
The image at the end is so powerful.
Nice! Especially “towing today into tomorrow,” and the way you tucked and folded email.
I love this, I think the last verse is awesome. You hit me in the heart with this one!
“For months I have been towing today” sets us up for the growth, change and allows us to hang with you “hanging, imagine the last autumn leaf.” Thanks for sharing your poetry this month. I have enjoyed reading it!
Nice– love boxed-up
and
towing today
into tomorrow.
Shaun
Your poetry has all life in it
One day you’ll shed this cocoon,
until then beating wings are enough…wow
This reads so smoothly. Love “towing today/into tomorrow.” And the ending is great! I’ve enjoyed your work, Shaun!