A Summer Rain
Sometimes when it rains
on a a soft hazy evening–
the trees become a canvas,
all the greens smear into sky–
a green, crayons cannot capture,
a name no one can come up with.
Rain falls from one leaf
to another as if a zillion tiny
invisible pitchers are filling
the entire world
a tall glass of water .
Birds chat
whistle, chirp–
they know the rain
will last through the night.
Louder, louder the rain spills
over falls
and falls,
a flash of lightening
cracks open
the end of an overcast day,
thunder growls.
6 thoughts on "A Summer Rain"
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A very sensory rich poem, Kim. The blending of colors and the abstract phrasing created a hazy, impressionistic effect for me.
Thanks Jeremy, I sat out on the covered deck to take in the rain and started to write Avery different poem, but then I had a Monet moment!
Oh my, Monet is my favorite. I have a water lilies painting above my bed.
Hi Kim – Lovely! I wrote about rain today as well. It sounds like yours was a big louder.
a green, crayons cannot capture,
a name no one can come up with. — beautiful!
And nothing at all wrong with a Monet moment!
Thanks Sylvia. I think Kentucky rains have more moods than any other rain anywhere!
VERY DISCRIPTIVE OF A REALLY SOFT AND CALMING NIGHT, WITH MANY WONDERFUL THOUGHS