Untitled [Bees]
(Note: I know this is too prosaic, but I’m too upset to make this into a decent poem so soon)
They’re gone. Just the other day, we saw
the workers clustered around the mouth
of the hive, noted the industrious zip
in and out that heralds spring foraging.
I’d come to assume the hum from this one hive
would continue on, as it has stayed alive
over five years. All sprung from the wild
swarm my husband strong-armed from a friend’s tree.
Before. Before. The sweetness these bees bestowed
as they reemerged each spring, surviving five fingers
worth of winter, ushering us through the deaths
of my father and nephew, returning even as our sons
left home. Winged metaphors for caretakers
and family, inspiring peace as I witnessed how
these creatures let go of their dead, undertaker
bees placing the lifeless outside of their home.
That we all might see what was once a body
in vibration lacks its essence at the end. Still.
Still. I miss these bees as if they are the sum
of all who have gone before them. I fill. Here.
Here’s the water you drink in the nearby birdbath.
Come back.
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What a loss, Ellen. Such a compassionate, haunting poem. These lines especially struck me:
…surviving five fingers
worth of winter, ushering us through the deaths
of my father and nephew, returning even as our sons
left home.
I’m crushed! Thanks for reading, Karen, and good to see you on here.
Good to read your work as well.
So sorry, Ellen. I was touched by “I miss these bees as if they are the sum/of all who have gone before them.”
It’s so mysterious how they simply left.
I really enjoyed this poem–and I do hope that they return.
Thanks, Shaun. Me, too, though I doubt it.
that second to last stanza is so interesting
They’ve been my muses for several years now.
The mystery of bees. the heartbreak of their disappearance. Yes, lovely, and haunting poem.
:((
Bees become a metaphor for everything lost. Nicely done
Thanks for reading, Pat!
This is so sensitive and loving. There’s a lot swept up in it — life, death, grief. You may want to trim it but you have a lovely poem here.
Thanks, Linda
So sorry, Ellen. Beautiful words for such a loss.
Guess what? They came back! Or, at least another hive moved in! Yay!!
Ellen – So happy to hear another swarm has repopulated your hive! We had bees many years ago that died from some virus. It was heartbreaking at the time. Love “winged metaphors” and your lovely invitation to lure them back.
Thanks, Sylvia! It’s a beautiful thing to have bees move back in. The hive that split had been there for several years–all begun by a swarm my husband rescued (a “wild hive”). Our other cultivated hives (started with a nuc we purchased) died every winter. So interesting, right?
This is lovely in its sadness. I especially like the repetition of “Before. Before.” And I can relate to some extent because of the wildlife around our home & my feelings when each disappears. We have a pond, & I’m always worried about the frogs.