Vinegar Tasting
It is a requirement of poetry
that you drink deeply of your life
Today I put my hand
on the giant sunflower’s face,
soon it will be too tall to reach
the size of a dinner bowl
and solid petals
They are called Golden Bears
for a reason,
The texture like weirdly thick,
hairy moss
No wonder passersby try to pull it
down to smell it, though I worry
it will damage the stalk
I made rice balls for lunch
But had to leave the rice to sit
while I went on some
two hours worth of errands,
Two different mailing centers
The Euclid Kroger lot a clog
of circling cars, crews to fix
the roof lot, delivery trucks…
Someone was honking at the line of ten cars
behind the one waiting for me to pull out
I tasted a few vinegars and oils at Stuartos first
I bought the Blood Orange but
nearly got the Persian Lime.
I also bought their thickest balsamic,
Dennissimo
Aged in casks of Juniper, Ash,
Oak, Juniper and Cherry
Swilling samples from little paper cups.
The rice was still sticky enough
when I returned with the tuna
I’d forgotten to begin with.
I wet my hands so I could
smash it into shape,
keeping the tuna inside.
Wet, sticky and moldable
fragrant with vinegar
Still
There was a coolness
under the redbuds
and a sweet breeze
aflutter with spittlebugs
I noted the hummingbird
had finished gathering
all the dandelion fluff
for their nest
Grey skies and humidity
seemed to loom somewhere,
but the sun came out often
Pedophilic President Trump turned 80 and
In France People Are Dying Like Crazy From The Heat
the rain finally drizzled down
in the cool evening breeze
With so much to savor
my soul had itched to paint
My hands a strange conduit for my soul
My eyes hugging all that cannot
be touched or tasted
The kitten rolling on her back
in the unmowed grass
Taken as if by catnip frenzy
to sticking all four feet in the air
and licking her armpits
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The first section is such a sumptuous account of your day, great wafts of fragrant wood, the feeling of the rice balls, the bright tangs of citrusy vinegar (which always reminds me of The Vinegar Tasters, which seems at least a little salient here)—even the clogged parking lot feels very physical. You drank very deeply today. You’re living poetry, like Leonard Cohen suggests: something to the tune of art isn’t the fire, its the ashes of a life well-burned. The second part, framed with those tyrannical head lines, is such a curious twist. “My eyes hugging all that cannot/ be touched or tasted” is in such stark contrast to the former feast, as if to suggest you’re always reaching deeper, further, ever for what’s already grown maybe “too tall to reach”. I even get a feeling of empathy pangs for the French and those affected by what’s-his-face collectively. You say “hugging” after all. I’ll say it again, it reminds me of Frank O’Hara, but of course with your signature sensuousness and inimitable perspective: it’s deceptively simple, but seems to reveal a fresh petal each time it’s read. I also love closing it out on the kitten, drinking it in maybe just s deeply, suggesting that this is the natural mode of being, living poetry. Great poem. Great account of a life well-lived.
just as deeply*
Thank you Goldwyn. You are absolutely correct, to be sure! As usual you see so much more than I do. You’re good for that!
I love how you take us into your point of view by the scenes you share and with language. I love Stuarto vinegars for shrub mocktails too btw! Also love “fragrant with vinegar” and
“a sweet breeze/aflutter with spittlebugs”
Yes, I wanted some vinegar for mixing into seltzer! The Denissimo works wonderfully with La Croix passionfruit and Limoncello to make it slightly sweeter. Addictive!
The spittlebugs and lightning bugs are all over the place
Wow, this was super clear. Played just like a movie in my head. I have been wanting to try Stuartos!
Oh yes oh yes it’s easy! They are always willing to let you taste all you want!
Your poem has a cinematic quality. I feel like I am right beside you in each scene.
“the rain finally drizzled down
in the cool evening breeze
With so much to savor
my soul had itched to paint”
Wow!
Love that! I adore cinema!
Supposed to be mulberry instead of the second Juniper.
Sorry to have missed reading your poems all this month..(so busy, so many)…this poem is amazing in its detail, and in the insights you have drawn from your day, by description giving us a spirituality of time and place!
No apologies needed, but I find it so sweet that you say that! I did my best also and I may catch up now that she’s all done!