Walking up from Hay Creek
Walking up from Hay Creek
Before I leave the cool shade
of towering oaks, beech &
maple; of lesser hardwood trees,
I stop to cross the rusty strand
of barbwire fence.
The flowing spring where I will quince
my thirst flows through a pipe. I stand
over the clear water; bow on knees
& hands as though to pray &
unafraid,
I drink.
If you were with me,
all I would need to quiet my thirst
for love that endures like this spring
would be for you to drink with me.
Holding on to the memory
of love comes easily, a thing,
as poet, I transform into words, versed
across; down the page. You are within me,
but I am without you & thus I drink.
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Suggestive ending parallel–across/down and within/without–concrete and conceptual at the same time.
Thanks Gaby for being a faithful reader. I keep returning to yours…
“Before I leave . . .I cross the rusty strand
Of barbwire fence”
Positively Frost-ian. Read aloud it sings.
K. Bruce Florence
You are within me,
but I am without you & thus I drink
love the play on within/without!