Watermelon
after
a
dark
week
then
sprouts
the
seed
leaf,
then
it is
an
exponential
creeper,
reaching,
daily
seeking,
sends
spindly
shoots
in search
of soil to
root,
an
anchor
point
from
which
will
spring
another
virile
stalk
with
shady
finger
leaves,
and
with
luck,
flowers
soon
to
swell,
hidden
from the
summer
heat beneath
the viny canopy until late
August or even mid-September
when the rains have ended and we go
early in the morning, when the red flesh is
sweetest, to rummage through the labyrinth
of weeds grown up around our patch poorly
tended, still in hopes to find some lumps of
earth turned via dna into pregnant orbs of
deliciousness; pluck our thumbs on their
white underbellies, study close the
quality of that dull thud to see
if we have any melons
ripe for plucking.
7 thoughts on "Watermelon"
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It’s so rare for a shape poem to work, but you’ve done it!
I love the line “anchor point from which will spring another virile stalk with shady finger leaves”. Also “rummage through the labyrinth of weeds grown up around our patch poorly tended”
Love this
I like what Jessica said. I usually don’t respond that well to shape poems but this is pretty amazing what you have done. The bottom part is so impressive. Great writing.
I love shape poems and know how challenging they can be. Great job with both the shape and the poem!
This is great. I was escorted all the way through with the shape and none of the words felt superfluous. Nicely done!
I’m always amazed by shape poems. Sometimes you get the shape without the content, but this one has the spurt and rhythm of growing. Nicely done!
Lovely. I feel like the formatting must have been painstaking, but it flows so beautifully!