What Kind Of Man
He smiles. He smiles with his eyes. His hats don’t fit and he likes them that way. The more starched-feeling, the better. His red plaid always paired with Old Spice. His hair never a color before gray. He has always been this way. To me.
He drives a giant tractor toy. It smells like earth and gasoline. Bubblegum wrappers and hay are cemented onto the floorboard. He feeds the cows. He looks at them like he knows them. He does. The ground turns into a stream with frogs and other things I’m afraid of. Everything is new. Everything is everything.
He is a man of the land. A human not afraid of the outside. It is a great place to be. Just be and swing. And collect cool rocks that look like golden nuggets. The uniform, again. Flannel. Sweater. Trucker hat. The epitome, deacon, of style.
We read. We read the same book. It’s about bears in a forest. Bears with empathy and curiosity, if I remember. Red, plaid flannel. Red chair. Cherry wood married with cherry red leather. Every man has their chair. I think bears like cherries.
We craft. He has a studio. Full of things to twist, knock, clank, glue, measure, cut, sniff, sneeze, and not touch. A stool is optional, available upon request. We make things. He likes to make things. I like to watch him make things. By things, I mean furniture. By furniture, I mean art.
It’s been years. I can’t remember how many, and I like it that way. I long to have your spirit.
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Wow, this poem is an absolute delight to read. The language, the descriptions, all beautifully woven together. I love it!
Thank you so much! I had fun writing it, your words mean a lot!
A great portrait of a man, possibly the narrator’s dad.
He was my grandfather, a great man indeed!
Loving portrait of a man.
Favorite lines:
He smiles. He smiles with his eyes. His hats don’t fit and he likes them that way. The more starched-feeling, the better. His red plaid always paired with Old Spice. His hair never a color before gray. He has always been this way. To me.
Thank you so much! His smile was one of my favorite things about him, I love that that part stuck out to you.
The way the lists come in full sentences, but the length of the sentences diminish each time…I’m not sure what to call that, but it is working so well in this piece. It creates movement and draws the reader forward.
Sweet but never saccharine portrayal. Well wrought.
My favorite stanza, because I feel the age of the speaker in the word choice, the way it closes out, and because…that hanging “he does” is unexpected and genius.
“He drives a giant tractor toy. It smells like earth and gasoline. Bubblegum wrappers and hay are cemented onto the floorboard. He feeds the cows. He looks at them like he knows them. He does. The ground turns into a stream with frogs and other things I’m afraid of. Everything is new. Everything is everything.”
I have to say this comment brought me a lot of joy as a blossoming writer. When I wrote this, I was looking at a series of five pictures of my grandfather and I. It truly flowed out of my hand in no more than 10 minutes with the intention of listening to my inner child’s perspective. Hence, your favorite stanza. 🙂 Thank you so much!
Beautiful prose poem. Stunning details. It inspires me.
Thank you so much! The imagery was very intentional in this piece. Glad you enjoyed 🙂
This poem as a lovely description of someone the poet cares about, possibly her grandfather.
Keep writing and keep reading poetry!
Yes- he was my grandfather, a lovely man indeed! Thank you so much for the encouragement 🙏🏼
So expressive in sound and picture!
Thank you so much! I was looking at five pictures (i.e. each stanza) when I wrote this and really intended on drawing out the empathetic details in each one. Glad you enjoyed it 🙂