what the flower of me says to the storm of your eyes
i am sensitive.
i am thirsty.
i am delicate
but not
fragile–
pour.
11 thoughts on "what the flower of me says to the storm of your eyes"
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honestly think i can cut the first two lines…
maybe.
I thinks the first two lines are necessary to balance the long title of this. Just saying…
fair.
i don’t know, now i’m back to wanting to cut them.
I like the first two lines being in this one. Lends a sense of knowing oneself that, in my opinion, one needs so they can truly accept the downpour of another.
I hadn’t thought of that perspective, thanks!
You are very welcome! Looking forward to reading more of your work.
Awesome title and lineation
thank you!
yeah. cutting the first two lines, y’all. kill those darlings.