What We Do in June
I tell my students, “Words
are an imperfect thing, our best
way to transmute our exact thought.”
I say, “If I could connect us–me and you–
it would still not bridge us. Imagine
a micro-USB, our two brains almost
together, and yet we’re each distinct, alone.”
But I can say, bird’s wing or mother’s hand
and you can feel its shudder towards air
or her cooling touch. I can explain distance
in numbers, or in the image of a door closed,
or of being surrounded by walls or woods.
If I could tell you how I feel in this moment’s end,
I’d say, outside, gray, the clouds brood–gloaming
because I’ve never been one for an ending,
no matter how temporary. If it’s something
that’s brought me a modicum of life,
I’d rather say, “Please, go on.”
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Please go on…
your words always will.
Thanks Shaun
You always get to the heart of what words can do. Loved reading your work this month, Shaun!
Beautiful poem to cap the month bro. Please go on…
And so it is…
Isn’t it funny though, how we still cannot know how or whether our words are understood even remotely close to how we understand them?
It’s one reason why I notice someone’s eyes or body language when speaking. Feeling is perhaps more accurate. Or feeling alongside words.
Yes, exactly what you say!
<3 <3 <3!!!
Thanks for all you have given us! Please, go on!
Thanks for all your poems & kind comments this month, Shaun! You’re a mensch.
Wonderful poem!
Very nice, Shaun. It’s been great reading your work. And yes, go on!
You crushed it this month
This is the heart of poetry! Thx for your poems and insightful comments!
These lines at the center of the poem: “But I can say, bird’s wing or mother’s hand / and you can feel its shudder towards air / or her cooling touch”!
Shaun, I will miss your poems–the beauty and emotion they hold.
each day I have looked forward to your poem
Please go on…look forward to reading your work again and hope to cross paths one day!
Love:
But I can say, bird’s wing or mother’s hand
and you can feel its shudder towards air
or her cooling touch. I can explain distance
in numbers, or in the image of a door closed,
or of being surrounded by walls or woods.
Well said Shaun. I have very much enjoyed your words and the words we’ve shared this month, so let’s drink to continuations instead.
Love the blend of teacher, student, and the act of writing here. Your poems are rich indeed, as are your comments. So enjoyed your work this month!
Wow…you nailed it. Every teacher of writing should read this poem to their students.
Excellent poem. Enjoy your work and words.