Which Way and How *
I open the liquid nest,
find the gleam of ocean turning,
swim to think, forgive,
hatch a forest,
ink in birds
to sing my mother
a letter of whispers
webbed with lace
in my name.
* Erasure of Sally Rosen Kindred’s poem “First Night.”
(I tried to insert the image of the erased poem, but couldn’t get it to work.)
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wow!!
( i couldn’t resist pruning your offering) (erasure is contagious..:)
open nest
turning-
think
forest
ink
a letter
webbed
name.
Cool.
I love this, especially “a letter of whispers/webbed with lace…”
Thank you, Shaun.
Karen, this is so soft and lyrical. The first line is alluring as is “hatch a forest.”
Thanks, Sylvia!
I enjoy reading your erasures. You’re a master.
Thank you, Melva.
This is amazing–what’s not to like? “Swim to think, forgive, hatch a forest … ” That’s just one of many lovely phrasese.
Thanks, T.M.