White Water
A reporter interviews a woman who had been
swept off her boat while white water rafting. He
wants to know how it felt to be sucked down into
the whirling water, especially knowing, did she
know four people had died because the melting
snow pack made the water run high? How
did it feel to be so close to danger?
Did she know she might die?
I want to know about the thrill of reaching up
through that white water before the surging
wave dragged her under. Did her heart beat
with wonder at the swirling water before it
pushed her up and over the rocks? Not
was she afraid but was she filled with
wonder? Did she love it? Was
that why she did it?
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I enjoy how the shift in perspective allows the reader to question along with the speaker in the second stanza
Thanks for your comment Shaun