Whiteflat, Texas, pop. 0
Wary of rattle snakes and tarantulas I walk around
the remains of the abandoned falling-down house
faded and gray, at the edge
of the cotton field.
Overgrown with weeds
I peer inside, fearful
traces of ancestral memories
will creep out and overwhelm.
Dry grass from the drought is crushed by each step
plastic bags, trash from a distant highway
blown up against the broken back door
and the hammock I brought on a visit
years ago is rusted and torn
No one will sit in it
Mom had said, speaking from a past self
that would never relax.
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Hi, Laverne! I love how you have successfully captured the vibes of remote Texas towns in this poem.
Haunted poem! I love you scoured the sense of place so well from the beginning.
Wow! A bleak beauty here. That last stanza, whoo!
Great details and a powerful ending!
You paint this scene vividly!