Widow Notes
Mind dust
settles between
the memory of us
and the empty rooms I ramble
alone
(A cinquain)
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Mind dust
settles between
the memory of us
and the empty rooms I ramble
alone
(A cinquain)
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This cinquain contains grief well.
especially love:
Mind dust
settles between
the memory of us
Thank you, Pam. I had hoped the cinquain could contain these two emotions.
This poem is surprisingly full
of emotion, effectively painted,
in a poem about emptiness and loss.
Well done.
Thank you, Bud?
So much of your loss and love in so few syllables—so strong with emotion.
Thank you, friend.?
Very well done!
Thanks so much, Kevin.?
A very full use of form. Thanks for sharing it.
Thanks so much, Shaun.?