Winging Our Way
I don’t know what my last sight
Of you will be, it may swing either way.
Most likely I’ll be the one going out the door
But until the bond of synapse is broken
There’s one memory I’ll always have of you:
Bending over in the rhubarb bed
Strangely detached and remote from the house
Where I stand watching out the kitchen window
You’re like a visitor marveling at a stranger’s garden
Taking inventory of the shadowy furrows
I turn, stooped and slow as if freshly aware
Of the heaviness of my body, and from the back
of my head I see you’re already a bird
Winging your way downhill
To the wild blackberries
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Oh mercy Jim – this is dredging up a bunch of emotions – the bond of synapse…thanks for this
Those last two lines stick with you!
Love the sound and sight of “Bending over in the rhubarb bed.”
So wild and mystical, this beautiful shape shifter! What a gorgeous ending poem for LexPoMo! I have so looked forward to and enjoyed reading your elegant poems!
What a vivid, though surprising ending – thanks!
What a pleasure reading your poems this month. I loved waiting to see what you would write next! This is one of your best.
What a beautiful, haunting poem to end with. I have so enjoyed reading your work, Jim.
Another great captured moment!
Wow! Jim your writing is so unique – thank you for your words this month.
Thank you for being the poet you are. I keep plunking away knowing that writing a line once in awhile that is good is worth all the effort—you are so good at showing us that.
So beautiful
Oh stunning—oh joy! I love this poem soooooo much—the beginning ending — the whole thing