Winter Sweaters
This morning I washed the last
of the winter sweaters, laid them
flat to dry in the sun. One, my mother
made for me when I was a 6th grader—
always making things big enough
for us to grow into. Over six decades ago
I chose pattern and colors
with her and even today wouldn’t
change a thing. Next to it, a vest
I made my younger son, scrimping
bits of yarn—the reason his sweaters
tended toward stripes. His sons
now wear the vest—warm wool
and buttons to challenge toddler
dexterity. How unlike life
are the paper patterns we followed—
rows marching single file, their future
laid plain from beginning to end.
My mother, though, didn’t live
to the end of her row and couldn’t
have imagined I’d dry her knits
and purls with mine under this
Kentucky sun. I touch the clean yarn,
still moist, and consider life’s
finite rows. Might mine end
before next winter or will I be
charmed with another chance
to warm this aging body
with the love plied into the wool
of my 6th-grade sweater?
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Wow, so many wonderful details and sentiments. And this: “How unlike life / are the paper patterns we followed” which takes the poem to new depths. A really satisfying read.
I love how this echoes the poem about knitting with your granddaughter. Of the many sweater kitted by my grandmother (we’d bring the yarn from Switzerland) there is one peach-colored one I love to wear, though the elbows are unravelling. I applaud you for washing them and keeping the moths out.
How beautiful, Nancy! The moments in time woven together seamlessly in this poem. I especially love the time lapse with the sun and how dry (or not) each garment is. We all complete cycles at our own pace, even under the same sun. Just gorgeous!!
This might be one of my favorites, Nancy! Love how tradition and time are woven into the sweaters. Just magical!
How unlike life
are the paper patterns we followed— yes!!!
Such a beautiful, tender rendition of generations and creations. I love your details that lead us along the sweater journey. I can feel the touches through your words.
Nancy, this is a total poem–evocative, original, and it sustains the metaphor throughout! I like: “How unlike life
are the paper patterns we followed— “
This is so beautiful. “dry her knits and purls with mine” I love the generational craft and love this evokes.
Lovely! Poignant- the metaphor of stitches as “rows marching single file” and the ties to living- past, present, a question of tomorrow- are fantastic. And the closure is so filled with comfort. I agree with Sylvia, this is one of my favorites (and all of your poems are gorgeous)! I think it’s the generational love that is so tightly woven in- your mother, you, your son, your grandsons.
I love the paper patterns. So unlike life and the weaving / knitting of your memories into the pattern itself.
Brilliant!You seamlessly knit history, tradition and love throughout.
Shew!x5 “How unlike life/are the paper patterns we followed—/rows marching single file, their future/laid plain from beginning to end. /My mother, though, didn’t live/to the end of her row and couldn’t/have imagined I’d dry her knits/and purls with mine under this/Kentucky sun.
I love how you represent cycles of both life and love in these beautiful sweaters!❤️