working mom
your fingers smell like
your olivetti, linoleum,
a leatherette and red felt
4-drink travel bar,
aluminum, lock and key
are you the only woman
who sits down to a dinner
of your-dad-is-laid-off spaghetti,
wonder bread folded over butter
in a 2-strand turquoise necklace?
just past 7 pm,
watery mint green comb,
your fingerprints are pin curls,
paper patterns, needle & thread,
soft bias tape, cool poplin
in morning, your voice
opens like an egg
on the back of a high heel shoe,
rises like the hem of our skirts
into ourselves with awe
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Sounds like an amazing woman. Love the rich details that bring her to life, that spaghetti dinner especially.
I am so pleased that you can see her! Mona was the bomb. Her siblings nicknamed her “Bing” because she ate cherries off the tree for lunch. She told my toddlers that I was probably the next great American president. She was a loner with Spanish eyes and thick thighs. ❤️❤️❤️
I love the experimental nature of the poem. You pull it all off beautifully.
a bevy of yesses for this one!
Oh my f……!!!!!!!
Everything about this is gold.
Title gleams
And all the way down
Each stanza a declarative glory
And the final pop of an egg
On a heel then.
“into ourselves with awe”
Wow!
holy moly
image upon image
brought off
with the unity of rune
Amazing portrait!
Amazing woman– can feel her spirit.
Love:
your voice
opens like an egg
on the back of a high heel shoe,
Something so nostalgic about this Amy.
‘ paper patterns, needle & thread,
soft bias tape, cool poplin’
It brings to mind hearing my mom sewing at the kitchen table after we kids were sent to bed. Beautifully told.