working mom
your fingers smell like
your olivetti, linoleum,
a leatherette and red felt
4-drink travel bar,
aluminum, lock and key
are you the only woman
who sits down to a dinner
of your-dad-is-laid-off spaghetti,
wonder bread folded over butter
in a 2-strand turquoise necklace?
just past 7 pm,
watery mint green comb,
your fingerprints are pin curls,
paper patterns, needle & thread,
soft bias tape, cool poplin
in morning, your voice
opens like an egg
on the back of a high heel shoe,
rises like the hem of our skirts
into ourselves with awe
Sounds like an amazing woman. Love the rich details that bring her to life, that spaghetti dinner especially.
I am so pleased that you can see her! Mona was the bomb. Her siblings nicknamed her “Bing” because she ate cherries off the tree for lunch. She told my toddlers that I was probably the next great American president. She was a loner with Spanish eyes and thick thighs. ❤️❤️❤️
I love the experimental nature of the poem. You pull it all off beautifully.
a bevy of yesses for this one!
Oh my f……!!!!!!!
Everything about this is gold.
Title gleams
And all the way down
Each stanza a declarative glory
And the final pop of an egg
On a heel then.
“into ourselves with awe”
Wow!
holy moly
image upon image
brought off
with the unity of rune
Amazing portrait!
Amazing woman– can feel her spirit.
Love:
your voice
opens like an egg
on the back of a high heel shoe,
Something so nostalgic about this Amy.
‘ paper patterns, needle & thread,
soft bias tape, cool poplin’
It brings to mind hearing my mom sewing at the kitchen table after we kids were sent to bed. Beautifully told.