skyfall
breeze sways
breaking shoulders
bogged down
holding all
won’t feel
nor move
swaying feet
falling sand
forced shut
holding baggage
won’t crumble
will crumble
tumble now
catch her fall
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I really feel like I’m falling. Good job!
The tone and structure are in sync here!