In Neutral
I look up the spelling of tzatziki.
Microsoft Word suggests “tatami.”
I wonder why it knows the word
for a type of Japanese flooring
but not the Mediterranean
yogurt and cucumber dip.
I look up the spelling of minutiae.
Singular, minutia. But who would
ever handle one minutia?
No one I know. Minutiae is
pronounced muh—NOO—shee—ee.
Has anyone ever used the long
double “e” in conversation?
I write:
Militant minutiae march
across the stage.
It only takes a minute to
make their matters known.
I cross it out. My tummy hurts.
I think about puns involving
tzatziki and the feeling of “icky”.
My eyes flit over to my notes and
I glance at the first three lines:
-to swallow whole the sea
-impasse
-a glass of red wine in a theater of dreams
Oh, my love! My dream! There’s an
entire ocean raging inside me. But,
for too many reasons, we can’t
break free.
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I love this piece of writing — it’s like being given an inside look at the writer’s process. And the joy of discovery there at the end: that’s exactly how it feels.
I agree with Bill, it’s always fun to peek inside the mind of another writer; it is here we find camaraderie and understanding. I especially enjoy “tzatziki and the feeling of ‘icky'” as well as “a glass of red wine in a theater of dreams.”
Ditto. There is freshness here. The wordplay and progression are great.
I also really enjoyed this–the perspective is really fresh and surprising
Well, I feel less alone with my personal narrative. I love riding along with you! 🙂