Calligraphy
“If I knew how to write a poem, I wouldn’t.”
James Galvin
My wife, there you are, safety, lifeboat and oar.
Your controlled poetry, so effortlessly formal.
Your small hands float like waves over the keys:
engraved ivory glyphs on laquer black buttons.
You are, when I wake from dream, working
on some stuck thing lodged sideways like
a bone in your heart. How much like an old
glass tintype negative making the little-
dress-black letters appear on silk sheet
smooth silver white illuminated screen light.
There is a cracked yellow whale bone
somewhere, somewhere, scrimshawed
and ashed with your image. Loving, safe
harbor, the only treasured hope for a sailor,
so very long gone, married to the sea and you.
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I began to cry!
Sorry not sorry
😀 happy june 😀
I love how you play with time and place in this one.
Thank you
Dreams do come true.
I love the ars poetica concept in this poem. It feels very intimate, and I especially love how you describe the movement of the muse’s hands over the keys like waves.
Thanks Jeremy
The sound of her clicking keys has always been the ambient noise in our house.
Love the descriptions here
Thank you L.
Incredible composition in this poem. I especially like the decision for the “somewhere, somewhere, scrimshawed” line. There was no better place to put that word.
Philip, yes! i tried to go back and italicize scrimshaw but timed out.
That poem has always floored me this is technically an after so yeah it had to go in somewhere.
Thanks for seeing it
My favorite love poems are from Coleman to Linda.
❤️ Samantha, the subject makes them easy to write 😀
Gorgeous composition. “How much like an old
glass tintype negative making the little-
dress-black letters appear on silk sheet
smooth silver white illuminated screen light.” Absolutely brilliant.
It feels intimate and timeless. Beautiful work!
Thanks H.A. that’s herself, thats exactly what i was trying to get the way she lets you see her eternal natire when she’s happy and focused on something.
Have missed reading you, Coleman!
Adore this. Adore the source. Adore the carry through. And this line reverberates with truth:
“some stuck thing lodged sideways like
a bone in your heart
Thank you Joseph, reverberates is such a neat word oh! Its June’s and the wordsmyths are playing again. Great to see you.
Yes, the tilted cliché is such a wonderful songwriters trick and it fit so well with the sea motif.
You’ve brought new passion to the theme of love. That your lovely wife can invoke such words says so much of her … and you.
Thanks Lee 😀 great to see you again this year.
Beautifully said and very poetic.
Thank you John 😀
Coleman, you lovestruck fool! You are batshit crazy for Linda and it shows in every word of this poem.
Swoon.
Lol…..glad you like this one 😀 Galvin, I mean ya know.
Let’s write some poems ….. happy June 1
I like how the whale bone helps pull together the sea imagery located at the beginning and end
Thanks for seeing and saying that Gabby it had been tooth but bone seems to work better.
the tooth and bone
of who you are as poets
…as people
Hi Jim 👋 yes , poets find their people somehow…..and these days we actually got more bones than teeth anyway…..lol
Aww – Thanks for starting the month off with such sweet abandon! You two need to work on a book together – a modern day Browning/Neruda flavor.
Great idea!
Oh, this is beautiful – I especially like the 2nd stanza’s imagery.
Tender and touching. Gorgeous and sparse all at once.