She slinks into
the evening, the sun
saying farewell
sharp
as a knife’s edge swims
in darkness,
the moon
a comfort
she could
sink her body
around Terror
thrashes
hard and soft
lulled by the
forever
crawl, the wet certainty of
sleep, a damp heap.
~ An erasure of page 12 in Sarah Freeman’s novel Tides
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potential what’s to come
ominus and final
…a damp heap
Endlessly effective with strong imagery. Placement of the lines on the page emotes a rhythm especially apparent when this poem is read aloud. Well done, Karen
I read it out loud too. It really flows and makes sense. There’s a Piscean quality in the piece. Those last three lines and haunting.
Thank you!
I’m in awe of your skill. Beautiful poem.
Thank you, Gwyneth!
I love the balanced tone and “the wet certainty of
sleep,”
Shaun, Thank you!
I can never find any fault in your erasures, Karen. This one is no exception.
Karen George, I would miss your words if I were to sick to attend this June, but I am stronger than I have been since 2019…