Ups and downs
There was a long time
I could’ve walked
down the hall
and visited
a third of
my world.
When we
existed together
I understood much
more than I do now.
Now I wake up quiet
to quiet too quiet
with only my
footsteps
to listen
for.
2 thoughts on "Ups and downs"
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.
The string of uses for the word quiet creates a really effective tension in this piece.
The quiet in the wake of an absence is sometimes heard the loudest. Managing to visually build the ups and downs around the theme is an art in and of itself.