A Geography of Endurance Day 4
Black Iron Lung
It squats in the corner like an anchor—
black-ribbed, unyielding,
a heavy geometry of iron.
To me it is a black iron lung.
It draws in the world’s bituminous panic,
filters the grit,
and exhales anthracite warmth.
Soot thick in my throat—
I stomach it at last.
I pull on thick leather gloves,
a hide barrier against the heat’s liability,
and reach for the brass coil.
The wire gives with a springy heartbeat
before the true weight of the iron takes over.
I yank the lever—
a gritty, metal-on-metal groan—
turning the act of opening the furnace
into ritual containment.
A harbor
where other people’s chaos is mastered.
Sentience is the anthracite I shovel in—
heavy, inherited malediction.
It warms the room
but leaves my hands stained black.
Now the iron wakes with a tock-tock,
expanding, contracting,
bleeding the sulfuric choke of swallowed pride
slow through the ash-caked mica.
Inside, a phantom flicker —
the illusion of fire burning in shadow.
The heat lingers long after the coal dies to a whisper,
a dull bruised red that refuses to let the room go cold.
I feel the throb of resentment through the iron—
the furnace-born slump of steel.
I have learned how to hold the ash
until the sun finds the garden.
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Very well done! Over the years to your voice has become much clearer. I remained fascinated throughout this poem. A lot of texture in this poem: leather gloves, a brass coil, levers, wires, iron, steel.
Linda! I’m honored, thank you. I’ve put a lot of effort into figuring myself out over the last few months.
This is incredible. Your images are so rich. I particularly love this line:
“The heat lingers long after the coal dies to a whisper,”
Amazing write!
Thank you!
What Linda said and more. You have grown up before our eyes as a poet these last few years These recent poems are the work of a newly mature writer with serious chops. Bravo.
Thanks Kevin, I am going to keep pushing it!
I appreciate the absence of self-pity in this poem
You always know what to say Gaby!
Great ending !!!!!
A pure poem, it has, to me the feel of belonging to or owning its spot.
I cant say it right but, like a house the feels.like it is sitting where it sits.
This. Right here this.
“I yank the lever—
a gritty, metal-on-metal groan—”
That is quite the observation Coleman! More on this later.
Loving these geographies of endurance, Jeremy.
Powerful entry…can feel the heaviness…”It squats in the corner like an anchor—/black-ribbed, unyielding,
Love the muscled-sound in: “I yank the lever—/a gritty, metal-on-metal groan—”
Yessss…”I have learned how to hold the ash/until the sun finds the garden.”
Thank you Pam, I’m glad to have your attention!
Love your well described images and the comparison with the iron lung…so creative.
Thank you Linda! A little backstory is I used to have a furnace like this in a garage and my buddies would come over and we would spend hours talking by it for warmth.
I’m part of the chorus – your work has grown beautifully over the years. It’s richer, more detailed, more fluid. I, too, love the geographies of endurance. Super ending!
Thank you Sylvia, it means a lot coming from you!
There is so much here to grip the reader, Jeremy. Sounds like what you have described is an iron furnace that lives and gives life. And I appreciate the dual use of anthracite and bituminous. So much to dig into! I hope this is part of an upcoming chapbook.
Thank you Lee, I won’t reveal all of my cards just yet lol
Great sonics. The poem grips me throughout
I’m glad it held your attention Pat!
I really loved how descriptive this was!
Thank you L. Coyne!
I love where this poem takes me
“a dull bruised red that refuses to let. . . go
I. . .hold the ash
until the sun finds the garden.”
so much learned
so much patience
I liked the metaphors. Well penned.