A Geography of Endurance Day 7
Drowning in Sweetness
I leaned over the rim;
vertigo dragged me
into the well’s unblinking eye
until the mountains vanished.
Unmoored.
Heavy, cold, damp air—
wet moss, cold iron, old earth.
A breath that had never known daylight.
Still, I drank.
The water slid velvet down my throat,
a polished stone
dropping through my chest.
It carried a gravity
that found the cracks in my bones;
a sweetness not sugar
but the stone-deep quiet
the mountain keeps.
The well is boarded now, the light cut off—
yet the sweetness lives in my bones.
I have tasted the roots
of the mountain
that swallowed me whole.
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Yum 😋
lol thanks Coleman!
These lines caught my breath and held ancient wisdom:
“A breath that had never known daylight.” and “I have tasted the roots/of the mountain/that swallowed me whole.”
I do like when you point out which specific lines you enjoy, Pam. Thanks!
This really does read like the well is pulling you inside it, making you one with the darkness of its waters and the tempting, nourishing sweetness the mountain offers. Both a gift and a curse in that the mountain and memory will stay with you forever, even as you are drawn back into the light above.
Very cool. Very humbling.
I love that interpretation of it. Thank you for reading and leaving such a thoughtful comment, I appreciate you!
Thank you everyone for reading. Just a bit of context: this well taps into the Lee-Grundy aquifer in northern Johnson County. The water from it has such an exquisitely balanced mineral composition — it’s always felt like the land itself is offering something remarkably pure and steady. Grateful for the space to share these pieces.
My goodness. Each poem you write this June leaves me in awe. This line is stellar:
“A breath that had never known daylight.”
and
“It carried a gravity
that found the cracks in my bones;
a sweetness not sugar
but the stone-deep quiet
the mountain keeps.”
Wow!
Thanks H.A.! Yes, I feel like I have found my voice.
a complete life story
I like this viewpoint!
Nice!
Thanks Chelsie, I always appreciate when you read me.
Beautiful development of a simple idea which becomes very rich. A “deep dive” indeed!
Nice pun, Greg!
“I have tasted the roots of the mountain,” Well done, Jeremy.
Thanks, John!
I will think of this poem and your lines, “a sweetness not sugar but the stone-deep quiet the mountain keeps,” while I am collecting spring water. Love this!
I’m honored!
Wow! Did this really happen Jeremy?
There was a well on the property I grew up on that I drank from until I was 13. I leaned too far into the well when I was a kid, but I didn’t ‘fall in’ per se. And yes, it is boarded up now.”
Loved the line -water slid velvet down my throat. You make the ordinary extraordinary with your words.
This is one of those poems that will stay with me a while. Every word was carefully chosen and placed–all of it captivating.
“I have tasted the roots of the mountain that swallowed me whole” is incredible. Your sense of place, along with the movement of stone and water captures an entire region.
I appreciate your distinguishing between different kinds of sweetness. It almost mirrors the different rock forms throughout the piece from the simple stone to the mountain. Thanks for sharing!
Your poetry captures the importance of place in us, Jeremy…
Jeremy, your “Geography” series is masterful and certainly worthy of publication. I know submitting often feels like being beat over the head with a club, but there IS a “home” for this series in print. Your poetry is excellent — relateable and full of sensory details.
Thank you E.! I think when LEXPOMO is done I’ll focus on that. I am really flattered by all of the encouragement, especially coming from you. I really appreciated you giving me feedback and advice on a poem or two last year.
“have tasted the roots
of the mountain
that swallowed me whole”
this is such an incredible closing stanza!