Tiana’s Dad: A Broken Epizeuxis
...but epigraphs when they are not short, ruin the top
of the poem, make it too heavy. They just rarely look
good on the page. Now, with that said, I do use them
sometimes but they have to be short.
Yeah but also it’s like saying, “Here, I brought receipts.”
That’s true, sometimes they can act like a threshold
but I do agree, they need to be short.
There is the also question of permission. What if the
person you’re quoting doesn’t want to be in your poem?
Often it’s better to just use a short “after” or “dedication”.
Kevin Nance, Coleman and Linda Bryant-Davis
Tiana Clark wrote a poem,
poems about this, but really
her poem is about her dad.
James Wright penned a letter,
letters to his young son, naming it
prayer. If you will, a kind of invocation.
Tiana feels that people,
could have epigraphs stamped
on their forehead and that they
float like (clouds) clouds (clouds)
above
her poems.
her poems.
Franz went on to win the Pulitzer.
A Pulitzer, like his daddy and Tiana,
Tiana’s dad didn’t write at all.
He did not my father
write to me either
or even, on me his simple name
A name, what’s in it, do you
think? Perhaps my poems
need prayer or a little invitation.
Maybe I just need an epigraph,
maybe a dedication.
Maybe an, *after, Tiana Clark’s Broken Ode for the Epigraph.
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The epigraph is humorous but the poem is devasting. The way Tiana’s fractures is heartbreaking. A poem that invites!
Thank you love, and thank you for the introduction to Tiana.
Nashville peeps. 😀
You’re amazing. This is all that. And devastating too, in those line about the dad.
Lol…I just realized I put the comma in the wrong place and gave Tiana a Pulitzer…..lol…..maybe prescient….thank you Bill for reading and seeing this poem.
” all we have are words
to observe the rose the rose obscures.” G. Orr
Had me at the title, and digging for its relevance throughout. A lot of “play” here in various ways and experimentation—but very masterfully done—and with heaviness heaviness.