Tiana’s Dad: A Broken Epizeuxis
...but epigraphs when they are not short, ruin the top
of the poem, make it too heavy. They just rarely look
good on the page. Now, with that said, I do use them
sometimes but they have to be short.
Yeah but also it’s like saying, “Here, I brought receipts.”
That’s true, sometimes they can act like a threshold
but I do agree, they need to be short.
There is the also question of permission. What if the
person you’re quoting doesn’t want to be in your poem?
Often it’s better to just use a short “after” or “dedication”.
Kevin Nance, Coleman and Linda Bryant-Davis
Tiana Clark wrote a poem,
poems about this, but really
her poem is about her dad.
James Wright penned a letter,
letters to his young son, naming it
prayer. If you will, a kind of invocation.
Tiana feels that people,
could have epigraphs stamped
on their forehead and that they
float like (clouds) clouds (clouds)
above
her poems.
her poems.
Franz went on to win the Pulitzer.
A Pulitzer, like his daddy and Tiana,
Tiana’s dad didn’t write at all.
He did not my father
write to me either
or even, on me his simple name
A name, what’s in it, do you
think? Perhaps my poems
need prayer or a little invitation.
Maybe I just need an epigraph,
maybe a dedication.
Maybe an, *after, Tiana Clark’s Broken Ode for the Epigraph.
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The epigraph is humorous but the poem is devasting. The way Tiana’s fractures is heartbreaking. A poem that invites!
Thank you love, and thank you for the introduction to Tiana.
Nashville peeps. 😀
You’re amazing. This is all that. And devastating too, in those line about the dad.
Lol…I just realized I put the comma in the wrong place and gave Tiana a Pulitzer…..lol…..maybe prescient….thank you Bill for reading and seeing this poem.
” all we have are words
to observe the rose the rose obscures.” G. Orr
Had me at the title, and digging for its relevance throughout. A lot of “play” here in various ways and experimentation—but very masterfully done—and with heaviness heaviness.
Thank you so much Joseph.
Yeah formatting, sheesh!
I wasn’t sure this expeeiment was going to translate and thatbthe play came through….you just made my day.
Words-my-theory
Thank you Smith have a blessed day 😀
written by a true poet
in continual conversation
with his poet friends
about poetry
Beaides planting trees,
What else is there to do?
Lololololololololololol
Love you friend ❤️
And you should know.
The genesis of this poem
Was a freewrite process I learned from an incredible craft talk. 😉
So clean and creative! The muse definitely lives at your house! Or in your backyard! Or is there something in the water? The prayers and invitations are always there.
😉 Stafford said it better than I can.
He said his muse told him that if he let her stay he would see things a particular way and every glance would.be a kind of salvation.
Lol….that’s a lot better than I could put it. …..lol….yeah ,something in the air around here in June.
What a wicked and clever man you are, Coleman. Satire! Erasure! Poignant family drama! All in one poem.
By the way, I think you and Manny have it in for me this year. At least Linda is on my side in this argument.
Lololololololol…..I didn’t want to keep you and herself staring at the gallows…… ” I got receipts”
Lololololololol….if james Wright says it, it must be true……lol
Luv ya……spurs in 7
P.s. you need to read her ode if you haven’t. She even uses the O’
It’s soooooo good!
If there is one thing for sure about lexpomo, it’s that I’m going to learn something new from you! Today it’s “Epizeuxis” and I love it
Epizeuxis…..lolol…….what an awesome word!!!! 😀 thanks Arwen…..me too.
A lot going on and very clever
Thank you Mike 😊
June, just doin June things.
” Y’all know this is nuts right?”
I yak a lot about how a great poem, to me, us like a puzzle and a glimpse into someone else’s perspective. Sometimes the poem falls away (in a good way) and you’re able to connect to the puzzle and thought so directly, and I felt that connection here.
Oh ! Shaun. Thank you for seeing it!!! I was so worried that this one would not translate. What you say about the poem falling away is, for me one of the grandest compliments I have ever in my life recieved about the writing.
Thank you so very much.
Agree with Arwen.
Looked up “Epizeuxis” what it means and how to say it. Laughed through the epigraph. my breath caught at:
“He did not my father
write to me either
or even, on me his simple name”
Loved how you used white space. It shocked with each phrase.
And 😂
when I reread “He did not my father
write to me either”, Christopher Walken”s speech style and voice (which I love) came to mind.
And what Kevin said.
Brilliant!
oops your white space didn’t properly translate in my reply
No seriously Pam, it’s.. this took three tries in formatting to the screen over a 48 hour period.
Sheesh! Im glad people are looking up the neat word. We all do it, I just didn’t know it had a name. Thank you reading and seeing the playful. I was trying to get the three fathers to work as a misty Epizeuxis as well but that may take some work.
Anyway yes !! Thanknyou
Is this ars poetica? whatever, beautifully done and am learning more each day! thx
Thank you, it is kinda that but kinda don’t really know what it is. It’s a June thingy…..Thank you and yeah…..ain’t we all….I just learned this word yesterday myself.
what a great poem—from the epigraph to the end—just fantastic
Thank you Kris 😀
For reading and commenting and liking 😀
What an amazing poem, Coleman. Funny (the epigraph), and yes, the poem is devastating (as Linda said).
I had no idea what Epizeuxis meant, but I looked it up (thank you), and I wasn’t familiar with Tiana Clark and I can’t believe I somehow missed that Franz Wright was James Wright’s son.
So well done!
Tiana Clark is a good poet!
Yeah !!! I think this is her latest “Scorched Earth”but not sure, either way…fantastic….lol speaking of the big P….Jericho Brown says- “challenges our notions of how many times a poem can turn…can hold”
❤️…..we are learning and sharing ……..i love it !
This is a fun read, Coleman. The references are top-notch.
Thank you H.A. I thonk its neat !!!!
It was fun finding stuff to defend my position ….lololololololol
As someone far removed from these circles, I had to do some research. Smartly crafted, sir!
Eric, we are all sharing and learning together. I hope your research was fun and thank you so very much for.letring me know you got something from it.
❤️ it makes it worth it 😀
I like this! Many different layers to it that all string together in the end.