Trees, Like Love
Oh, look upon that tree in brightest bloom
Each petal a harbinger for a pear
The poet sighs, and then begins to croon
Upon youth and young love symbolized there
Dreamer, I say, return yourself to school
Or find yourself a book on botany
For while your use of symbols is quite cool
Fruit only grows upon a matured tree
Years does it take for blooms to blossom forth
Years does it take for love to grow so sweet
Youth’s green is pretty, but is not the worth
Of nurtured love immense, and hard to beat?
Bright petals fade, but this is not the end
For trees, like love, renew each year, dear friend
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Is it a sonnet ?
I think it’s a sonnet !!!
My wife is laughing at me…..lol
I like what it is.
Love the message
And trees !
lmao I had this exact same thought.
Lovely write L. Coyne.
From one tree lover to another. Thank you.
Love the intimacy in “Dreamer, I say, return yourself to school” and “For trees, like love, renew each year, dear friend”
Love the lesson in the tree.
Love the line – years does it take for love to grow so sweet.
Beautifully done! I love the title too.
L, the imagery is well crafted in how you use nature to convey an important message.
Fresh and rejuvenating! Love – “Each petal a harbinger for a pear” Also love the advice you give the dreamer – go back to school or find a book!