Voltage
Four trees in the yard are dead from lightning strike:
a locust behind the laying house, a hackberry that shaded
the bee hive, a maple inside the border of my drive,
a tulip poplar along the fence of the weanling field –
now a bird perch which sheds its branches one-by-one.
And in the garden among the stone-berry bushes
a pine pole stands and holds the line that brings light
for the pleasure of my reading until way past dark.
Today, weeding the asparagus bed as a thunder storm
rushes in from the west, I turn in time to see the sizzle
of the wire before the tumultuous bolt of voltage
corkscrews up my spine, kicks me like a wicked kiss;
then the brutal slam, a heavy frozen fist, where even
its near miss is a direct hit, a breaker in my flow of time.
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I like the building tension in the second verse. The first verse seems listy
I love the details of the trees and the line “kicks me like a wicked kiss”.
Again, I agree with Jessica! Great poem!
Nice use of foreboding and excellent day on the farm images leading up to the very unique language like, corkscrews, kicks me, wicked kiss (how’d you think that one up?). Excellent work Jim.
great prose… poetic storytelling at its finest.
nice.
I too loved the tree details in the beginning, and the lines “the tumultuous bolt of voltage /
corkscrews up my spine, kicks me like a wicked kiss.”
Actually loved every word and line in this poem. Can I steal it?
“A breaker in my flow of time” Wow!
kicks me like a wicked kiss~
yes